Wednesday, September 5, 2007

Contour of the Science Building


The first drawing was done yesterday in class, while the second was done about two hours ago after taking feedback from my teachers. I think I did better on my revision because I tried to use less lines and more clean lines.

9 comments:

leah petriccione said...

i like the detail you used in the first one, but i can definitely see the improvement of the drawing as a whole in the 2nd! i admire you, i had such a hard time! really good job with all the angles and everything looks proportional!

Molly Jacques said...

these are really awesome. way better than mine haha

Lily Glover said...

You are really good at proportion and putting just enough detail in but not too much.

Kurt Huizenga said...

I don't know really, I like the first better. The people in action poses add so much to the drawing, and in this case I enjoy the bold lines.

megmcmillan said...

I see things that are good in both drawings but I can definitely see the improvement in the second one! good job!

Kara Petrisko said...

Wow so I like both these drawings! You draw well! keep it up!

Liz Brown said...

I especially like the angles on those glass windows that were sticking out of the building... you were able to accurately portray the dimension of them.

MSS said...

I love how you included people in the first drawing

Kevin said...

Your 2nd sketch turned out marvelously, it really looks like you took more time and their are no hairy lines which is fantastic.. good job!